I really enjoyed the background music, it synced well with the story! I also liked the customizable options to change the speed so readers can adjust it to their preference or just select "all." As for the story, there were several places I got confused and I'm wondering if maybe we need more time to get to know Will better, the stakes, the crew, etc. before the non-stop action happens. I liked the retrospect scenes and summaries, I think that helps too! Thank you for letting me play :)
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I really enjoyed the background music, it synced well with the story! I also liked the customizable options to change the speed so readers can adjust it to their preference or just select "all." As for the story, there were several places I got confused and I'm wondering if maybe we need more time to get to know Will better, the stakes, the crew, etc. before the non-stop action happens. I liked the retrospect scenes and summaries, I think that helps too! Thank you for letting me play :)
I'm glad you liked it and I'm grateful for the feedback!
love it!
Many thanks!